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Post by TheGreatPikkon on Jan 1, 2014 2:07:41 GMT -6
My first suggestion is to make a direct link to the members list on the home page, and a separate link to the universe. I guess I'll rewrite the basics page for you, too. It seems a little weird. at www.angelfire.com/fl5/saiyajin-instinct/Rules/Basics.html For stat descriptions, I'd change them to: Is all seven stat categories added together. Yes, even KI, although it is gained differently. Determines physical attack damage. (See Techniques page) Decides who strikes first in battle, if you can run away, and your number of dodges. Decides how much gravity you can handle and your training gains. Masters also require certain levels of it. Determines energy attack damage. (See techniques page) Is used to perform attacks(or would techniques be the right word??). Each attack(tech?) drains Ki. It is gained in a unique way. Is good, evil, or neutral. It is based mostly on your actions. Masters require a certain amount of this. Are your earned points, which you can distribute to your six stats as you like. (Ki gained separately) Is money. It is earned by working and used to purchase items for your character. That should make the list look nicer. This will be easier when I get to 30 posts...
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Post by TheGreatPikkon on Jan 1, 2014 2:56:44 GMT -6
(you should just copy/paste this stuff in, btw. It won't take too long.) move the word Basics above the set point rule. SET POINT RULE: Math is hard. This is a rule that was put in place to make updating easier. This means your stats are SET while your status shows you as learning, working, or anything else that earns points for your character. When your status shows you doing something and your stats increase, your stats DO NOT INCREASE until you finish the task. For instance, if you're learning a technique for 500 points per day and on day 3/5 you increase your Intelligence with the points you've earned so far, it won't take effect until you're finished learning the technique. UPDATES: All updates must be posted in the forums. Only make one update post per day. IT IS IMPORTANT TO ALWAYS POST YOUR UPDATES IN YOUR CHARACTER'S UPDATE THREAD IN THE FORUMS! I will not accept any changes through chats or messengers. Updates occur once per day. Make all of your daily updates and changes in ONE post. This means that all of your stat increases, items bought, actions taken, and anything else that needs to be included in your daily update should all be together in a single post in your update thread in the forum. If you make multiple update posts in a day and I mess your update up because of it, your profile will stay messed up for at least one day until I have time to sort it out. I (Mikkelo) update this game alone, so updates won't be at exactly the same time every day, but I will be as consistent as possible. (this gets rid of rules 2 and 6) 1. I can't stress enough that THIS IS A GAME! With that being said, we will not tolerate cheating, lying, bullying, racism, or any other form of malicious action toward players outside of roleplay. Lying to an opponent to trick him/her or trash-talking your enemy in the game is welcome, but keep it reasonable. The game is meant to be challenging, versatile, and as similar to the series as reasonably possible, but most of all, it's meant to be fun for all players. 2. Be a good sport. Be fair and don't make personal attacks toward other players. Contact an admin/mod with logs of the events in question if you think someone has cheated or isn't doing things right. We are fair and we don't deal with players who try to cheat others as a habit. 3. You can only be ONE character in this RPG. You may be a created character. Fused characters are allowed, but you must have an original name (nothing stupid) for them. If you join as multiple characters, ALL of your characters will be deleted and you will be banned from the game. This will not be tolerated unless an admin has given you express permission to have multiple accounts. 4. You'll need an account on the forums at thesaiyaneliterpg.proboards.com/ to play. Your roleplay and battles will be posted and graded there. Updates to your character will be posted on your character page at www.angelfire.com/fl5/saiyajin-instinct/Players.html You can use the forums or other means of communication to battle, but the logs of all battles must be posted in the forum to count. You can either edit the last line about leaving msngr names or get rid of it if you want.I rearranged the rules that were left and re-wrote them to be more clear That should give things a more organized feel. *whew* One page down. Lots to go.
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Post by TheGreatPikkon on Jan 1, 2014 14:40:49 GMT -6
at www.angelfire.com/fl5/saiyajin-instinct/Players.htmlchange The RPG Members To make things a bit simpler so you don't have to travel planet to planet to look at the player profiles of our members we have decided to add a section where they would all be on a single page. We still suggest looking through the planets as different things may be going down things like Tournaments, Planet take overs etc.. Members of the RPG to Members We have decided to make a members page for easy access to the character profiles. We suggest browsing the universe when you can, as things such as tournaments or planet takeovers in progress will be noted there. The Saiyan Elite Also, LINK THIS PAGE ON THE MAIN PAGE! It's the main thing players should need. It should only take them one click to get there and one click to choose their name and see their info. You can leave the link to members page on the universe page, but make a universe page link on the main page to separate it from the members page. Maybe call it the Starmap or something. And fix your typo on the first line of the main page lol. It's supposed to be read, not red. If you don't proofread, you will make misakes!
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Post by TheGreatPikkon on Jan 1, 2014 15:47:10 GMT -6
www.angelfire.com/fl5/saiyajin-instinct/Sponser.html ... dem grammerz.... SPEACIAL THANKS This section is where I will cover the origins of this game and the people I met along the journey to where we are now. First off, the initial site was based on a mix of a few RPGs and my own ideas. I got into Dragonball Z and GT rpgs around 2001, when I was a very young lad, and quickly found an RPG called Final Battle run by a guy who went by the tag of Bigdaddy27405 or Bigdaddy27409 and the game was a good one for its time. I really enjoyed it, and Bigdaddy (Barry i believe it was) and I got along very well. I played there for months. After playing Final Battle for a while, (a year, maybe more) I came across a few RPGs here and there that looked good, and I tried them out, but nothing was ever updated consistently (FU&**ng Updaters right..) or the gameplay sucked ass. If you're out there, Barry, good job on always updating ALL the time like a true pimp...AND ALWAYS BEING GOKU!! Next, I decided that if no one can keep a site running, maybe I can, so I started designing and trying to come up with a decent game, and eventually, as you can see, I did. Muwahahaha.. At any rate, I had an ol' skeezy ass, basic rpg with set damages, a crappy system, and layouts, ect, but I got better at coding and designed a good site, but the system sucked. It had some good points, and eventually, I lost my internet access and got tied up with life. I tried to come back a few times but never really had time, so I decided to give all my ideas and info to BIGDADDY and left.. Then I happened to come across what I personally consider to be the greatest text-based Dragonball Z RPG game of all time- the CYBERSAIYJINS RPG. I played this RPG for a long time- about a year or so. It had around one hundred members and we had the greatest time playing. I started as Kui, then when Bardock became available halfway through the game, I asked to change to him and got to! I also had a buddy who played as Shin in the RPG. I think he changed his character halfway through like I did. It was truly awesome, and I hope that one day Barry and James (CSJ) find this and appreciate that it lives.. Also.. Any CyberSaiyajin players out there?? PLEASE, if you are, come and join us! We need the throwbacks!! And now we find ourselves here, many years after I began roleplaying, many years after Final Battle, and many years after CyberSaiyajins, on The Saiyan Elite RPG. What happens from here, I know not, but I do know this wont last forever, and like all the other great RPGS before, I will one day not be able to keep this thing going, but until then... PLAY ON! That was hard to edit.. now.. www.angelfire.com/fl5/saiyajin-instinct/Staff.html(try to line the spacing up better) TSEMaster1 Name: Garrett Job: Creator, Updater Updates: Everything needing updating Available: Every day. Time available differs. And I guess add me in there, if you want. Something like: TSEMaster2 Name: Doug Job: Co-creator(if you want), Moderator, Grammar Nazi Works on: Main site and forums Available: Every day. Time available differs.
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Post by TheGreatPikkon on Jan 1, 2014 16:21:00 GMT -6
www.angelfire.com/fl5/saiyajin-instinct/Teams.htmlchange Inorder to start a team you must have atleast THREE (3) members to start/maintane a team. Inorder for this all to be valid you must have both members email me and the leader/co leaders email me stating they are the leaders/co leaders. If atleast THREE (3) members do not email me then the team will not be made. To join a team you must discuss it with the team leader(s) and a email must be sent by both parties. to To start a team, you must have at least THREE (3) members. The members must choose a leader or co-leaders, who must make a thread in the forums in the (what section?) section, announcing the formation of the team. At least three members must verify that they would like to join by posting in the thread before the team can be formed. Members wishing to join an existing team must be cleared by the team's leaders. Only team leaders can add members to a team. This is done by contacting an admin with the new member's information and the updated team details. www.angelfire.com/fl5/saiyajin-instinct/Travelling2.htmlchange text to... You can travel through space if you have a space ship/pod. The time it takes to travel varies by distance. The base gravity in space is 50. You can train while traveling in space if your ship is large enough, and even add a gravitron to some ships.
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